That's a nice idea Kast....should make things more interesting up in here...not that things aren't interesting--i see lots of new great talent emerging in here :D Sage Francis is a special talent...his style is relatable, down to earth and original and his lyrics have so many double entendres....a g...

[quote name="Ghostic"]Feel me: The sun borrows heat from him as sweat serves as his windscreen Occluding vision, barely smelling contents of wastes he pushes to find green His house is a joke, broke, so he shares the same house with his office He eats only when important, Christmas is when he adds a...

I'm really feeling ur ish fam.....nice rhyme scheme u got there.

Props to the both of you...

Lori's style of writing has fluidity, something that just rolls off the tongue...lots of conviction.

But i just happen to feel Nevilbee's piece more.... has a nice storyline that gets u hooked.

vote= Nevilbee

heavy ish Kast... I blink once… and the world thinks I have abandoned them… Once a round atmospheric gem… Now over grown with sin… Tears that have crystallized on MY face through the ages… Because I have watched how "faith" and "truth" have become myths barred behind cages… It’s outrageous… how some...

[quote name="BATSIRAI E CHIGAMA"] IF YOU WERE BOOK If you were a book You would be the book I would not give away The kinda book I would lock up in my room And in my silent moments Go back to and reread For the teary moments and those That brought a smile Slip you in between The Long Walk to Freedom...

Man...this is a tough one 4 sure.... I think its good that your pieces r different...it makes 4 a good read... Poetic Seraph's piece is more general, in that it can be intrepreted in many ways....Konko took a more literal approach to this concept--quite direct and to the point...eiish, i'll have 2 g...

[quote name="AddictiveSoul"] Yea, 'twas my Bday on Tuesday. Keystyled this piece for the occasion .[/quote] In that case.... HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!!! :D :D so how many candles did u blow out this year? :wink: Please allow me to leave u with this wise Cherokee expression... "When you were born, you ...

Hey!!...

my first POTW

Again, thanx 4 the kind sentiments fam.....means a lot 4 real!!

peace.

He stares into space, lost in his imagination, ripple effect and all, he dreams of liberation, he sees his Mother--before the master's bullet took her life, he sees his Sister--before she was raped and miscarried twice, he sees a loving household--the picture perfect family, but the master's whip st...