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[quote=XRP post_id=77746 time=1180306523 user_id=4379] WHEN NEXT U GUYS HAVE A POETRY CHALLENGE LET ME KNOW...VIA PM.... I WILL ALWAYS SHOW UP [/quote]
   

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kast vs ??? :)

by kast1 »Sun Jun 03, 2007 7:09 pm

i hope you dont mind, but im going 2 repost this in a new thread

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by AddictiveSoul »Sat Jun 02, 2007 5:27 pm

Kast's piece

I manufacture far too many ideas for them all to be stored between my ears.

So when my mind is filled to capacity,

I let my thoughts seep through a "pen"

and pour

onto

a thirsty "page" that swallows my words whole

-A "page" that is easily manipulated by its author.

Its paper-thin soul, believes everything that is spoon-fed to it.

The "pen" is no different from its enemy

-It does exactly what its told.

The wielder has full control.

It will keep spilling ink until its soul runs cold...

Pen and page connect only to kill each other.

Its a sad truth that they are just tools

- used and abused...

Eternal rivals made to fight

everytime someone picks up a pen and pad to write, scribble or draw...

either way, they end up in the middle of war

while the aurthor sits safely behind closed doors and

watches

how the

ink

pours....

This goes out to all the pens, pencils and sheets of paper...

that have fought, shed tears of ink, and died for the sake of these words...

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by AddictiveSoul »Sat Jun 02, 2007 5:24 pm

Nurudeen's piece

Pleasant evening on a walk to the theatre

I see a fire fly dancing in the night

who knows why they light up?

why they dance?

But I know why the Dance troupe I'm going to see

will do their thing

It's an awareness campaign against abortion

My fiancee would be on stage

she just removed Our last one

and in ten minutes the act is done

the rigours of monthly practice and workout

gone, with the swinging hips, nimble feet,

bulging muscles, strecthed skin, as limbs with precision are flung about

perspiration, now dry as the dead drum beat......

...Fades,......and backstage it's time for Puff Puff Pass

I'll get drunk tonight and with a hangover probably miss class

But I'm the teacher though

Yeah! those kids, what more do I teach them?

I'm done for the term with weeks to go.

sometimes it's good not to give a f*ck

just roll the blunt, smoke, float, get detached

and view this world as from lofty heavens through a looking glass.

Yeah!~

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by kast1 »Mon May 28, 2007 2:05 pm

ok i have sent my verse in, just waiting for A soul to post it

:D

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by nevilbee »Mon May 28, 2007 11:14 am

WAITING!!!!

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by XRP »Mon May 28, 2007 12:55 am

WHEN NEXT U GUYS HAVE A POETRY CHALLENGE LET ME KNOW...VIA PM....

I WILL ALWAYS SHOW UP

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by kast1 »Sat May 26, 2007 12:13 am

ok ok ok, ima polish it up now, and send it so A soul in a few, i took a very abstract view on the topic, hope i get the message through though.

hey nurudeen, you want votes or should we stick with just comments? i dont mind, its up to you bruv!! haha

good luck fam!!!

peace

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by Nu'Rudeen »Fri May 25, 2007 2:33 pm

i already sent my piece to A*Soul

not like it came out the way i wanted but....

hey i already sent it and theres no changing that

will be waiting on you Bruh!~

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by kast1 »Thu May 24, 2007 9:31 pm

GREAT IDEA, i have the basic outline for my piece, i just have to polisg it up here and there, nuru, hows yours coming along, do you need more time? let me know,

cant wait to see how we contrast each other

stay inspired,

peace

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by AddictiveSoul »Thu May 24, 2007 12:37 pm

Heya.

Well Kast did say that it's gonna take him a while to send me his piece, so everybody's just gonna have to sit tight.

With all this excitement building up around the poetry battles, I sure hope we gonna have alot of votes...?

In the meantime, those who wanna try their hand at the poetry battles can, from now on, send me a pm with their request. That way we avoid alot of spam threads/posts flooding battle threads. Plus, i wanna make it so ya'll don't know who you'll be battling... more fun that way, right? :wink:

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